hahahaha..oh keen, he'll never change, honesty is the best policy after all!!
well badical i see u have improved as well, i likeit for the most part, not crasy about the stroke though around the heads, i think it would look much better without!! good job!!

It might have been better to write the text by hand. It looks to uniform and straight to have been jotted down whilst sitting in class.

well the only reason i didn't do it that way, chrome, is because it would look too neat. this is meant to look like something that you just jot down in class, around doodles, and stuff that just comes to mind when being in a band, jotting down new material, anything and everything, on paper. that's actually one of their songs, and i didn't put the whole thing on there because it was meant as the start of a song, like this person thought about it while in school. just messing around, but then it went onto something better than that.


thank you for the input, though. always appreciated =]

I like the notebook paper feel of it, however the font you used looks like a FONT and not really like writing, I guess even when we doodle around usually writing text on something, we keep within the lines of lined paper. You know what I am saying here? if you are going to use that font, then make it a bit bigger and put it within the lines so it looks like it was actually written, thats all..

once again its something along the lines of "bedwetting insecure puss voter and his pathetic lil cronies."

Lots of things are way better than the votes they get but if normal people dont put the effort in to vote on other peoples work then the abnormal people(grim voter and his cronies) are going to keep getting their way.

wow. the mighty Keen has something positive to say!?

talk about shock and awe.




....thank you? haha

its not bad... I like it a lot better than your other stuff. but I can't see it going past a five. I like the notebook paper.

(3.5)

pssshhhh. it's way better than that [IMO]

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