Sorry...I am brutally honest.

Terrible. What the hell is this supposed to be? Your ode to the love you have for that person? Did she dump you for this failed piece or art?

Terrible. What the hell is this supposed to be? Your ode to the love you have for that person? Did she dump you for this failed piece or art?

Terrible. What the hell is this supposed to be? Your ode to the love you have for that person? Did she dump you for this failed piece or art?

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Too much going on - but the effects individually are good. The tree showing the only bit of color in the background is neat. The superimposition of the couple in the foreground looks very staged. Other than some shadow, I'm not sure what you can do to make it look more like part of the picture. If you're in a field of wheet - maybe there should be wheet coming up to your knees in front of you as well as behind you.

Too much going on - but the effects individually are good. The tree showing the only bit of color in the background is neat. The superimposition of the couple in the foreground looks very staged. Other than some shadow, I'm not sure what you can do to make it look more like part of the picture. If you're in a field of wheet - maybe there should be wheet coming up to your knees in front of you as well as behind you.

Too much going on - but the effects individually are good. The tree showing the only bit of color in the background is neat. The superimposition of the couple in the foreground looks very staged. Other than some shadow, I'm not sure what you can do to make it look more like part of the picture. If you're in a field of wheet - maybe there should be wheet coming up to your knees in front of you as well as behind you.

Looks good.

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